帮忙看看这两篇短文有没有语法错误

帮忙看看这两篇短文有没有语法错误
A Hello!My name is Lily,I am a girl.I am thirteen years old.I have two good friends.They are Mary and Alice.I love them very much!I like green and red,but my favorite color is black.My favorite sport is ping-pong.I think it is interesting.For subject,I like English and math.Because I think they are fun.B Hello!This is my friend.His first name is Jim.His last name is Smith.He is 12yearys old.His birthday is July 18th.He is a student.He is lazy.So he don't like sport.But he likes watching baseketball on TV.And him likes computer games too.For breakfast,he doesn't like eggs,but he likes milk and bread.Why does does he like apples and bread Becaose he thinks they are healthy food.For dinner,he likes broccoli,tamatoes and bananas.He eats very well!He is a good boy,and him is my good friend.