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Travel in Yunnan
As far as I'm concerned,in this summer vacation,most people went to the Shanghai Expo.Believe it or not,I went to Yunan to enjoy the natural scenery spots there instead.It is the first time for my family members and me to travel in Yunnan.One August 1,we went to Kunming by air and in the same afternoon,we went to Jiuxiang to enjoy the caves.After that we went to Stone forest,which is the hometown of Ashima.On August 3rd,we went to Dali to see Cangshan Mountain and the Erhai sea.I prefer the Erhai Sea because we took a boat tour on the surface of the lake,enjoying the blue shy and bright sunshine.Actually,I am fond of nature very much,as you can see that from the words above.On August 5th,we went back home with a lot of good memories in our mind.
I love travelling in Yunnan.