大家请给我看看,这几段话写的语法有错误么?

大家请给我看看,这几段话写的语法有错误么?
First,to be optimistic.No matter what happens,give ourselves encouragement and hope,believe in ourselves:there is nothing we can't overcome.
Second,have a heart of thanksgiving.We should think that the world is beautiful,and we live a goog life.Althrough there exists some shortages,we have healthy bodies and happy families,it is already very lucky.
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亚丁景锐 幼苗

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1.一般用firstly,secondly
2.to be optimistic后面没有完,所以不用No,可以看作to引导的短语
3.第一句没有主语,可以用被动语态.
4.have a heart of thanksgiving也是没有主语,可以用动词ing引导的短语.
5.we have healthy bodies and happy families和it is already very lucky之间要么用连词,要么是两个独立句子
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angelking430 幼苗

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Firstly, to be optimistic, no matter what happens, you have to give yourself encouragement and hope. You have to believe that there is nothing you cannot overcome.
Secondly, have a grateful heart....

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小妖鼠 幼苗

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we live a good life
Althrough 应该是Although
there exists 最好改成there are

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