One　day,I　was　walking　along　a　street　as　I　remember　I　needed　

One　day,I　was　walking　along　a　street　as　I　remember　I　needed　a　pair　of　sock.I　tur...
One　day,I　was　walking　along　a　street　as　I　remember　I　needed　a　pair　of　sock.I　turned　into　the　first　sock　shop　that　came　into　my　eyes,and　a　boy　clerk　came　forward　句子中有哪些错误　一小时内回答　谢谢　快!

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sandy12345 幼苗

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改错:
One day,I was walking along a street 【when I remembered that】I needed a pair of【socks】.
I turned into the first sock shop that【caught my eye】,and a boy clerk came forward.

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你太爷幼苗

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One fine afternoon I was walking along Fith Avenue when I remembered that it was necessary to buy a pair of socks. I turned into the first sock shop that caught my eye, and a boy clerk who could not have been more than seventeen years old came forward.
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lblaohumao 花朵

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One　day,I　was　walking　along　a　street　as(改为when)　I　remember（改为remembered）　I　needed　a　pair　of　sock（改为socks）.I　turned　into　the　first　sock　shop　that　came　into　my　eyes,and　a　boy　clerk　came　forward　

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初吻猪幼苗

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1. as改为when 2. sock改为socks

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lin_baobao 幼苗

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One　day,I　was　walking　along　a　street　as　I　remember　I　needed　a　pair　of　sock.
as改为when remember 改为remembered sock改为socks
I　turned　into　the　first　sock　shop　that　came　into　my　eyes,and　a　boy　clerk　came　forward. 这句没有错

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joycejoyce0222 幼苗

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我整段写下吧，不知道是否合你心意
One day, I was walking along a street as I suddenly recognized that I needed a pair of socks.So I walked into a sock shop which appeared in my eyes.Then a boyish clerk came forward to me.

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