能帮我改改英语作文吗?{1.The student uniton make a activity,which named
能帮我改改英语作文吗?
{1.The student uniton make a activity,which named is "Disagree with waste,Agree with no waste ",more than 900 people join in the activity .2.The activity at enter of school canteen,at monday 4PM on march 4,2013.3.Using the board to show the behavior of waste in our school,and play the video to know the behavior.4.The behavior show that ten millon people die of starvation in the world every years.} 就是这篇作文了,时态错误就不管了,主要是“主谓宾”和“句子结构完不完整”这两个问题!我把序号标上了,这是五句话作文,这里是其中四句.