英语改错 在线等 一行可能有一个 有的没有

英语改错 在线等 一行可能有一个 有的没有
A person's age no longer tells you something about
his social position,marriage or healthy.There's no longer,
a particular year which one goes to school or goes to
work or gets married or start a family. The social clock
that keeps us on time and tells when go to school,get
a job,or stop working isn't as strong as it was used to be.
It doesn't surprise us to hear a 28-year-old university
president or a 35-year-ole grandmother,or 70-year-old
man who has become a father for the first time.What we
ao know,public's ideas are changing nowadays.
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