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goodview2007
1我常常听妈妈说那雄伟的"黄河,"梦中我常常梦见那条雄伟的黄河。 今年暑假,我们(women)全家去旅游,听说要经过那条"黄河"我高兴极了。 我趴在窗户上,眼睛睁的大大的看那条黄河,那条先映入眼帘的是一条被夕阳照的发亮的带子,在前方闪闪发光,突然火车齐鸣一声上了桥,我才真正领略到黄河的雄伟气势。她带着一路金色的光芒,像一条金色的巨龙崩向远方。列车远去,安静的黄河仿佛慈祥的母亲,展开巨大的肩壁拥抱着子女。 这就是黄河--我们(women)的母亲河。 I often listen to my mother said that the enormous"the yellow river,"my dream ioften dreamed of the great yellow river.this summer,our family,i hear through the"yellow river"i was so happy.i lie on the window,his eyes nearly pepped out of watching the yellow river,the first into apicture of the sun shining on the gleaming,suddenly the train were chorusing in abridge,i really appreciate the majestic appearance of the yellow river.she took agolden,Like agolden dragon collapse into the distance.the train gets farther into space,quiet as the loving mother to expand the great wall with their children.this is the yellow river--our mother river. Smiling Ithink smiling is as important as sunshine.Smiling is like sunshine because it can make people happy and have agood day.If you aren't happy,you can smile,and then you will feel happy.Someone may say,"But Idon't feel happy."Then Iwould say,"Please smile as you do when you are happy or play with your friends happily.You will really be happy again."Smiling can let you have more friends.So Isay,smiling is like aflower.It will give you happiness.微笑我认为微笑是一样重要的象阳光。微笑是象阳光,因为它可能使人愉快和有一个早晨好。如果您不是愉快的,您能微笑,您然后将感觉愉快。某人也许说,"但是我不感到愉快"。然后我会说,"请微笑,您,当您愉快地是愉快或戏剧与您的朋友。您真正地再将是愉快的"。微笑可能让您有更多朋友。如此我说,微笑是象花。它将给您幸福。 只能打这么多了~~ 稍稍追加点分 好不