关于书信的文章帮忙改正March 23 2013Dear Jack, Let me tell you something
关于书信的文章帮忙改正
March 23
2013
Dear Jack,
Let me tell you something about my school life. My school is called HuangHai University .There is have beautiful view and broad campus.Over 6000 student in this school. I was choose Chinese Professional because it will be easily to find a job. After class, I enjoyed Book Club of English Novels .Make some friends and read famous English novels.My English is get improve in this club.
Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely
Ken
求帮忙改正 指出语法问题 标点符号 或者哪里语序不对 或者有更好的表达方式 或表达错误 还有格式问题 自己写的 感觉错的地方很多 初学者 感激不尽 (尽量以列序号的方式解析每一句)
March 23
2013
Dear Jack,
Let me tell you something about my school life. My school is called HuangHai University .There is have beautiful view and broad campus.Over 6000 student in this school. I was choose Chinese Professional because it will be easily to find a job. After class, I enjoyed Book Club of English Novels .Make some friends and read famous English novels.My English is get improve in this club.
Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely
Ken
求帮忙改正 指出语法问题 标点符号 或者哪里语序不对 或者有更好的表达方式 或表达错误 还有格式问题 自己写的 感觉错的地方很多 初学者 感激不尽 (尽量以列序号的方式解析每一句)
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以下是我给你修改的信，请参考： Dear Jack, March 23rd 2013 Let me tell you something about my college life. My college is called HuangHaiUniversity. The university has a beautiful view and a broad campus. There are Over 6000 students in our university. I have chosen Chinese as my major because it will be easy for me to find a job after graduation. After class, I enjoy going to the Book Club to read English Novels. I have some good friends and we read famous English novels together. Since I joined this book club, my English has been improved greatly. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Ken
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