关于英语 书面表达今天天气晴朗,颇热,你和朋友们在海滩玩,看见很多人,有的人在游泳,有的人在打沙滩排球,有几个男孩子在题

Today,the weather was clear and quite hot.My friends and I are playing on the beach,and we see many people .Some of them are swimming,and some are playing beach volleyball,a few boys are playing football,some girls are singing and dancing.There are some people lying on the beach.The sand is hot,but the water is quite cool.

Today, the weather was clear and quite hot, you and your friends on the beach playing and saw many people, some of them in swimming, some people playing beach volleyball, a few boys in that football, in some of the girls sang and danced, and there are people lying on the beach, The sand was hot, but the water is very cool.

It is clear, but quite hot today. My friends and I are playing on the beach. We see quite a few people here. Some of them are swimming, and some others playing beach volleyball. There are several boys playing football and girls singing and dancing. Others are lying on the beach. The sand is hot, while the water is cool.