错误的改过来就行了.Everyone's future is different .I think my future

Everyone's future is different .I think my future will be wonderful .
My ambition is to be an English teacher .I hope to be a good teacher ,like Ms.zhang .Because I like teaching my students about their difficult questions,they all think l am friendly.Teachers always impart knowledge to us .so i think i must study hard every day.
I'm a good student ,and I can be better .In order to make my ambition come ture !
我觉得你这个好像没有写完 而且意思不是很连贯.拙见 希望对你又帮助

Because I like teaching my classmates about their difficult questions,they all think l am friendly.
改为：Because I like teaching many difficult questions that I know with my classmates. they all say I am very good.
我觉得这样会更好！