英语的段落改错.麻烦各位大神,急要.有分有分.

英语的段落改错.麻烦各位大神,急要.有分有分.
Miss Li is my English teacher.She impresses us deeply her lively English classes.One day when the first bell rings,the monitor said our English teacher was going to have an operation this day.The class turned silently at his words.At this moment,Miss Li appeared the door.She looked tired and pale.She said with a low voice,"l have asked the doctor to put down the operation till tomorrow because l don't want you tou miss a single class.A new teacher will take his place,but l hope you'll get on well with him." Heard this,all of us were moved to tears.
第二篇
Last week,we feel sorry to hear that our class teacher was ill.Afterwards,we had a decided manage on our own.During the followed days,all of us did a good job.None of us late for school and we did morning exercise better than ever.In class,we gave a classroom a thoroughly cleaning to welcome her.Our monitor presented some flowers to her while she stepped onto the
platform.Seeing the red flag for Weekly Model Class,she was happy but moved.
一段中大概有10个错,大小写和单词拼写错那些不算的.