英语短语改错 共十个Last year,I went to climb a mountain for my father

英语短语改错 共十个
Last year,I went to climb a mountain for my father.Since I had never done anything like that before,I felt very exciting.I wanted to reach at the top as soon as possible.So I walk very fast.However,an hour later,I became tired but no longer felt like walking.My father came to me and said,''The mountain is very high.You should walk slow so that you can get to the top without feel too tired.''I followed her advice.We got to the top one and a half hour later and I didn't feel very tired.My father taught me good lesson.I learnt that we should see the whole picture before beginning to do something.