小弟初学英语特别是作文不太好 请各位大虾帮我改改作文以后小弟一个礼拜这时候写一篇,主要帮我改改语法3Q
小弟初学英语特别是作文不太好 请各位大虾帮我改改作文以后小弟一个礼拜这时候写一篇,主要帮我改改语法3Q
这是一篇日记 写的是生日
MARCH 5th FRIDAY Sunday
Today is my birthday and also it is the day in honour of LeiFeng who is one of the most friendly man in the world ,so I made my decision to study him in this special day
At first I made the breakfast for my parents .they are satisfied with my cook skill .Centanily,the breakfast are very delicious ,secondly I repair the desks and chairs which are in my classroom it is so hard to me and I tried repairing them over and over again Finally I succeed .Lastly I went to the home for the aged and shared my birthday with the old .
This is the most instructive birthday I have ever had.I will never forget today!
主要帮我改改语法 还有 满分15帮我打个分吧~
这是一篇日记 写的是生日
MARCH 5th FRIDAY Sunday
Today is my birthday and also it is the day in honour of LeiFeng who is one of the most friendly man in the world ,so I made my decision to study him in this special day
At first I made the breakfast for my parents .they are satisfied with my cook skill .Centanily,the breakfast are very delicious ,secondly I repair the desks and chairs which are in my classroom it is so hard to me and I tried repairing them over and over again Finally I succeed .Lastly I went to the home for the aged and shared my birthday with the old .
This is the most instructive birthday I have ever had.I will never forget today!
主要帮我改改语法 还有 满分15帮我打个分吧~
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Today is my birthday and also it is the day in honour of LeiFeng who is one of the most friendly man in the world , so I made my decision to follow his example on this special day
At first I made breakfast for my parents. They are satisfied with my cooking skills .Centanily, the breakfast is very delicious. Secondly, I repaired the desks and chairs which are in my classroom. It is so hard to me and I tried repairing them over and over again. Finally I succeeded . Lastly I went to the home for the aged and spent my birthday with the elderly.
This is the most educational birthday I have ever had. I will never forget today!
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At first I made breakfast for my parents. They are satisfied with my cooking skills .Centanily, the breakfast is very delicious. Secondly, I repaired the desks and chairs which are in my classroom. It is so hard to me and I tried repairing them over and over again. Finally I succeeded . Lastly I went to the home for the aged and spent my birthday with the elderly.
This is the most educational birthday I have ever had. I will never forget today!
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