增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号 (∧) , 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号 (∧) , 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( ) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
I always wanted to be great scientist. I had a dream of discovering a new drug that would save hundreds of people’s life. Unfortunately, I was never very well at chemistry at school and the teacher was used to get angry with me. I decided to becoming an inventor and designed an amazing new product. My parents were encouraging, but told me to be a few more realistic. A few weeks late, I had an idea of designing a pen to write in water. In my disappointment, a friend of me pointed out that it was not a new invention.

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小题1:great 前加a
小题2:life → lives
小题3:well → good
小题4: was used去掉was
小题5:becoming → become
小题6:designed → design
小题7:a few → bit / little
小题8:late → later
小题9:In → To
小题10:me → mine

小题1:great 前加a I always wanted to be great scientist.这句中scientist 是可数名词。所以在写成a great scientist
小题2:life → lives I had a dream of discovering a new drug that would save hundreds of people’s life. 这句中hundreds of people’s life 指多人的生命，用复数lives.
小题3:well → good I was never very well at chemistry at school 这句中be good at “善于做某事”所以改成good
小题4: was used去掉wasthe teacher was used to get angry with me 其中 be used to do “被用来做谋事” used to do “过去常常做谋事”根据翻译“老师过去常常生我的气。”所以去掉was
小题5:becoming → become I decided to becoming an inventor 其中decide to do sth 所以改为become
小题6:designed → design I decided to becoming an inventor and designed an amazing new product.这句话中design 和become 都做decide 的宾语，写成decide to do sth
小题7:a few → bit / little but told me to be a few more realistic.其中realistic 不可数，所以用a little. A few 修饰可数名词。
小题8:late → later A few weeks late,“几周后”可写成after a few weeks/ a few weeks later
小题9:In → To In my disappointment “使某人失望的是”to one’s disappointment
小题10:me → mine a friend of me pointed out 其中 “我的朋友”写成“a friend of mine.”

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