希望英语自我介绍,请高人指导有什么不恰当,不适合作为演讲的地方.
希望英语自我介绍,请高人指导有什么不恰当,不适合作为演讲的地方.
I'm so proud to be here and becomes schoolmate,are also very pleased to be able to stand here for everyone to make a self - introduction.I am * *,feel is a shy boy,are not good at,and other exchanges,of course,others think so,It is a good friend of me in the face of many.I also hope that we can and do you become good friends.And ordinary boy I love played computer games,interested students we can go to the exchanges in private exchanges.Of course,computers play more injured body,therefore,to have a healthy body usually I like sports,favorite sport is soccer,golf feel all right,like classmates we can go to their experience of soccer skills.Now went to college,I am here to learn knowledge,hosted here my dream,I will work hard to fight,even if he is good enough,but I will strive to become outstanding.
I'm so proud to be here and becomes schoolmate,are also very pleased to be able to stand here for everyone to make a self - introduction.I am * *,feel is a shy boy,are not good at,and other exchanges,of course,others think so,It is a good friend of me in the face of many.I also hope that we can and do you become good friends.And ordinary boy I love played computer games,interested students we can go to the exchanges in private exchanges.Of course,computers play more injured body,therefore,to have a healthy body usually I like sports,favorite sport is soccer,golf feel all right,like classmates we can go to their experience of soccer skills.Now went to college,I am here to learn knowledge,hosted here my dream,I will work hard to fight,even if he is good enough,but I will strive to become outstanding.
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I'm so pleasure to be here and becomes a new schoolmate,are very pleased to stand here facing everyone to make a self - introduction,though.I am * *,feel is a shy boy,and ,I hope that we can become good friends each othert,I love playing computer games,interested students we can go to make exchanges in private exchanges.Of course I see ,playing more more computer games does harm to our body,therefore,I usually like sports for develoing a healthy body ,my favorite sport is soccer,golf and so on ,If possible ,we can comunicate our experience of soccer skills.Now I went to college where I wanted to host my dream,so ,I would work hard to make my dream true ,although I am not good enough,I will stride to become myself outstanding.
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