一篇七年级英语简单的作文,看看有没有什么语法错误?

一篇七年级英语简单的作文,看看有没有什么语法错误?
my name is li ping p,i'am a 13years old girl.i'm a student in no.1 middle school.in fact,i likes cjildrens very much.and i can help childrens of sports and music.i relly likes playing basketball vrry well,and i likes music,too.i can play the guitar.and i know a little big about geography,i can tall children.
i can speak chinese very wall and i can a little english,japanese.
题目要求是应聘一个照顾孩子的职业,要求是会体育,音乐.结尾,开头,给出了,就不写了.
luoxuzh 1年前 已收到4个回答 举报

helen_e 幼苗

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第二排children拼错了
第二排,and i can help children with sports and music.
第三排i really like playing basketball very well,and i like music too
第四排and i know a little bit about geography,i can teach children
第五排i can speak chinese very well and i can speak a little english and japanese

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qetfdcs9586 幼苗

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怎一个多字了得!

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薇鲜的鱼 花朵

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修改如下,请过目!
My name is Li Ping. I'm a 13-year-old girl. I'm a student in No.1 Middle School. In fact, I like children very much, and I can help children with their sports and music. I relly like pla...

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悠悠的一片流云 幼苗

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错的太多了
my name is li ping p,i'am 13 years old .i'm a student in no.1 middle school.in fact,i like children very much.and i can help children with sports and music.i relly like playing basketball ,a...

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