英语好的帮帮忙……This afternoon will be the last meet.One more time

英语好的帮帮忙……
This afternoon will be the last meet.One more time i watch you,please let me back to the deep ocean silently…… From now on I will disappear in you world,but I will miss you.No opportunity to say so much,No opportunity to do a lot of things.I hope you will forgive me bucierbie.帮看看,有语法时态等等的毛病吗,有就帮纠正一下,
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jhg871202 幼苗

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It will be the last meet this afternoon.One more time i see you,please let me down into the deep ocean silently.From now on I will disappear in your world,but i will miss you forever.There is no chance to say too much,to do a lot of things.I only hope you would forgive me .
赶快给分,我的肯定是对的

1年前

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轻风皑皑 幼苗

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This afternoon will be the last meet. One more time i(大写"I") watch you, please let me back to the deep ocean silently…… From now on I will disappear in you world,but I will miss you.No opportunity to ...

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tibfozsdx 幼苗

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opportunity 最好改为chance

1年前

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wanghuiyue 幼苗

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同意楼上的.
另外,最好分行写,这样看起来更加伤感一点.

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