英语翻译该项目于2008年1月立项,已于6月递交了中期报告,目前正在顺利进行中,计划将于同年11月结项.

第一个回答时态不对,修改如下
This project was set up in January,2008.The mid-term report about it has been submitted in June. Now it is going on perfectly and is planed to be finished in November this year.
第二个稍微好一点,但是还存在连接词等问题The program was proposaled in January 2008, and the interim report was submitted in mid-June.Now the Program is being carried out smoothly.We plan that the program will end in November of the same year.

The project was approved in January 2008, was submitted in June an interim report is being carried out smoothly, the project will end in November of the same year.

This project is set up in January,2008.The mid-period report about it was submitted in June.It is going on well now and planed to be finished in November this year.