帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有什么错误,
帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有什么错误,
Thomas’s uncle bought him two gold fish.He liked them very much.He tried to feed them some fish food.But they didn’t eat any more.Thomas thought the gold fishes were unhappy,so,he realized something suddenly,He brought fishes went to the river.And put them in the river.The fishes were very happy,Thomas felt happy too.
Thomas’s uncle bought him two gold fish.He liked them very much.He tried to feed them some fish food.But they didn’t eat any more.Thomas thought the gold fishes were unhappy,so,he realized something suddenly,He brought fishes went to the river.And put them in the river.The fishes were very happy,Thomas felt happy too.
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