time get away is to fast.and we haven't to make it go on.som

how time flies!
we all missed the past period of time,but we can do nothing.I think ,i have missed (lost)the person who don't love me ,but you have missed(lost) the person who love you deeply !what a pity!
In the past one year ,we lived happily,but it finished so soon.although we all missed the past ,we can't get back ,and we can't change the fact now.it's not only your mistake but also my.It's a mistake which was made by we all!we can't living in the past time ,and i want to correct our mistakes .
everything is finished now.i have hurt you heart.i'm sorry,and i'm sorry to cause so many difficulties in your future.
goodbye ,my love
you are the only girl who i have loved in my heart ,forever.
对你的意思不太了解,大概是这样吧.意思不对的地方可以改一下,找我也行.

时间流逝得太快，这并不归我们左右．有时候，我会想到这些．我失去一个不爱我的人．但你...失去了爱你的那个人.
没什么语法错误.

时间匆匆逝去，我们却无法继续。有时候我想，我失去了一个不爱我的人，但你却失去了一个爱你的人。
一年的时光，甜蜜的日子总是转瞬即逝，我们也很快就变了，我们都无法回到过去，应该说是永远也回不去了。这不单纯是你的错，或者是我的错，这错误是我们共同犯下的。我们不能回到过去，所以我给自己个机会改正我们的错误。
一切都结束了，对过去的日子说声对不起，对你和你的将来说声抱歉。
再见。我永...

6楼的好强`have changed是完成时，前一个have是助动词..

time get away is to fast. and we haven't to make it go on.
时间过得真快，我们没有让它（爱情）继续。
sometimes i think about that. i loss one who don't love me.
我时常会想这些事情。 我失去了一个不爱我的人，
but you ... loss th...

基本上是很多语法小错误，还好错不大

time get away is to fast 这里的to应该改成too

不少的语法错误啊

厄... 建议重写....
有许多比如说这样的错误
【we have changed is too fast too】
怎么能有两个动词呢？

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