I like travel by train. There are some reasons for it. First, the train ticket is more cheaper than others. I could afford it. Second, on the train I can enjoy the beautiful scenery on the way. It’s a fun way to travel with a lot of friends. Third, it is safer to travel by train. Last, we have a rail system that connects us easily from one city to another. 自己原创的 绝对没有重复
能不能把每条展开的多一些,写110词左右on the train I can enjoy the beautiful scenery on the way这句话或把 on the train 或 on the way删掉会好很多吧。其他都很好,语法也没有什么错误,我虽然有点唠叨,但这是我要期中考试的作文,谢啦。。。。。。。↖(^ω^)↗