英语高手进来...底分50,Dear friends:I’m glad that I’ll be in your fam

英语高手进来...底分50,
Dear friends:
I’m glad that I’ll be in your family soon.fist,I’d like to introduce myself and my family to you.
My name is selina,my Chinese name is 张潇月.I’m a girl.I’m 13.There are four people in my family :mother,father,a little sister and me.my sister is 8.she is cute.My father is smart,he is an engineer.My mother is beautiful,she likes to by some clothes.We are happy every day.I often travel with my family .I like doing some interesting things:have a trip,play computer games,read books,shopping,singing and dancing.I like American.I think America People is friendly to Chinese.I think going to America can broaden our vision and learn more knowledge.I appreciate that you accept and regard me as a member of your family.I believe that we can get along very well.
高手们帮我看看有什么错的地方哦,并帮我修改一下...小妹我英语不好...恳请朋友们帮助~·