My Favourite Hobby
My Favourite Hobby
My favourite hobby is playing the piano.When I was about four,i began to play the piano.At the same time,I became interested in it.I often play the piano about two hours,and I practise it every night.I play the piano about nine years.I think play the piano is so interesting,and I think it is the most important for me.I like playing the piano,but I don't want to be a musician when I grow up.
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My favourite hobby is playing the piano.When I was about four,i began to play the piano.At the same time,I became interested in it.I often play the piano about two hours,and I practise it every night.I play the piano about nine years.I think play the piano is so interesting,and I think it is the most important for me.I like playing the piano,but I don't want to be a musician when I grow up.
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I often play the piano about two hours.把about改为for...
I play the piano about nine years.此句改为I keep playing the piano for almost nine years.
I think play the piano is so interesting,.改为I think playing the piano is so interesting
I think it is the most important for me.Important后面要接东西的,改为I think it is the most important thing to me.
其实你的作文还有许多地方可以改的更地道些,不过你只让检查语法错误,就没有过多注释.
I play the piano about nine years.此句改为I keep playing the piano for almost nine years.
I think play the piano is so interesting,.改为I think playing the piano is so interesting
I think it is the most important for me.Important后面要接东西的,改为I think it is the most important thing to me.
其实你的作文还有许多地方可以改的更地道些,不过你只让检查语法错误,就没有过多注释.
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