英语作文在线纠错，各位大侠，帮忙~~谢！！！ 这是律政俏佳人的观后感

英语作文在线纠错，各位大侠，帮忙~~谢！！！ 这是律政俏佳人的观后感
Have you ever seen a girl who went on her way to her dream determinedly?
Yes, I have seen one-Elle Woods, whom I appreciate greatly.
What she attracts me most is her struggle to become an excellent person. Being a blonde, she was thought as a vase and abandoned by her boyfriend, but she refused to be negative and decided to fight for her lover and herself. Even be made fun of, she just ignored and worked harder. Finally, she proved her excellence by the fact.
Elle's passion to the life also gives me an deep impression. A lawyer must be serious? She said no. She never changed her beautiful surface and outgoing character. Holding on the passion on law study and justice in her heart, she was sure to become a good lawyer.
Elle is also a lovely girl who treats people sincerely. She smiled, brought sunshine to others.
As a college student, I learned a lot from Elle. What's the most important is that we should have a firm ideal in our life. With that, we'll have faith in ourselves and try hard to realize it. What's more,have passion in our life.When meet frustrations, we should choose to overcome it rather than avoid facing it.
Just like Elle said:" It is with passion, courage of conviction and strong sense of self that we take our next step into the world."
大侠们指出哪里错就可以了，不用再弄一遍