英语改错Great changes have been taken place in my village ,Ten y
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Great changes have been taken place in my village ,Ten years ago ,the small and low houses,which lie on the north of the lake,produced much waste .As the result ,the lake was serious poluted.To the west was a sandy field,that was the source of dust,Better still,a brickyard on the southwest ,side of the lake used up a great deal good soil,Now the poor house have been replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings,The sandy field that the villages used to ploughing has been covered with fruit trees,On the lake the villagers oftem spend his spare time boating and fishing.
Great changes have been taken place in my village ,Ten years ago ,the small and low houses,which lie on the north of the lake,produced much waste .As the result ,the lake was serious poluted.To the west was a sandy field,that was the source of dust,Better still,a brickyard on the southwest ,side of the lake used up a great deal good soil,Now the poor house have been replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings,The sandy field that the villages used to ploughing has been covered with fruit trees,On the lake the villagers oftem spend his spare time boating and fishing.
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Great changes have been (去掉been) taken place in my village ,Ten years ago ,the small and low houses,which lie (改为lay) on the north of the lake,produced much waste .As the (改为a) result ,the lake was serious (改为seriously) poluted.To the west was a sandy field,that (改为which) was the source of dust,Better (改为Worse) still,a brickyard on the southwest ,side of the lake used up a great deal (加上of) good soil,Now the poor house (改为houses) have been replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings,The sandy field that the villages used to ploughing (改为plough) has been covered with fruit trees,On the lake the villagers oftem spend his (改为their)spare time boating and fishing.保证完全正确.
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