英语短文改错Mr Grey was a biology professor ,and he had a big coll

英语短文改错
Mr Grey was a biology professor ,and he had a big collection of rare bones which he was very pround.one year he managed to get a new and better at an university .as Mr Grey was very busy ,his wife made the arrangements for her possessions to be taken in a moving van to their new home while he was away from work .the following week three men started out take the things out of Mr Grey 's house and loading them into the van as one of them brought out a large wood box .he is just about to throw it into the van wuth all the other things when Mrs Grey ran out from her house and said ,"please treat that box very gentle .that one has all my husband's bones in it"the man was so surprised that he nearly deopped the box on his feet.
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shuning_86 春芽

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第一句,proud后面加of.
第二句better后面应该少了什么.
start out后面是直接接动词原形吗?如果是的话那后面应该用load而不是loading.后面的as one of them的as是不是用对了我不太清楚.下一句的he is about to ……应该用he was about to,还有with也打错了.
please treat that box very gentle ,应该用gently,不用very gentle
下一句that one has应改为there are
dropped,不是deopped
还有每一句的开头第一个单词的首字母记得要大写
有些句子没有必要写那么长,完全可以分成两句写.有时候太长的句子反而容易错.

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这是我照着卷子抄下来的,有的词是打错了 ,见笑了。辽宁高开提有改错,都应该改10处错误

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第一句:proud 后面加of 第二句:better后面应该还要加个one吧(我看了一下上面老师的答案,他是觉得应该加上job这个词,但是我没有十分看懂这个句子的意思,所以你可以选择用他的答案),如果是at错了的话就改成in。 第三句:away from work应该改成away for work吧,前者表示的是远离工作之类的,后者才是表示出门工作 先写到这里,我一会要去上课了,回来再给你答案。
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