Exchange writings with a partner.Give each other positive id

Exchange writings with a partner.Give each other positive ideas how to improve what you have writte
九年级下册英语书Reading 、的3c的作文、今天就要、写的好了、快的有高分
写英语作文
ivnana111 1年前 已收到2个回答 举报

最后一盏灯1 幼苗

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I have already read your essay and I think you can work on the following parts to improve your essay.First,your essay has to be more cohesive.You need to use words such as,first of all,secondly,and so on to connect your paragraphs because it looks like the entire passage is inorganized.Moreover,you need to expand your essay better than what you have written.For example,you need to show the readers concrete examples on the points that you have made.Overall,your essay is decent.

1年前

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jzl520 幼苗

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交流的作品与一个同伴合作。互相给予积极的主意,如何提高你的写作

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