请看看我这两个定语从句用的对不对,哪个更好点?
请看看我这两个定语从句用的对不对,哪个更好点?
Starting from my third academic year,I have taken the International Economics and Trade as my minor subject,which has offered me a comprehensive understanding in theories of International Trade,Marketing and Finance.
Starting from my third academic year,I have taken the International Economics and Trade as my minor subject,through which I have obtained a comprehensive understanding in theories of International Trade,Marketing and Finance.
两句话都写得对吗?哪句更好一点?