请看看我这两个定语从句用的对不对,哪个更好点?

请看看我这两个定语从句用的对不对,哪个更好点?
Starting from my third academic year,I have taken the International Economics and Trade as my minor subject,which has offered me a comprehensive understanding in theories of International Trade,Marketing and Finance.
Starting from my third academic year,I have taken the International Economics and Trade as my minor subject,through which I have obtained a comprehensive understanding in theories of International Trade,Marketing and Finance.
两句话都写得对吗?哪句更好一点?
sihaowawa 1年前 已收到3个回答 举报

yangningning2008 幼苗

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第一个 比较好

1年前

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0314嘉祥 幼苗

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都对.什么是更好呢?是指复杂程度吗?其实是一样的,只是用的词组不同.

1年前

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Carrefour1 幼苗

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Starting from my third academic year, I have taken International Economics and Trade as my minor subject, which has offered me a comprehensive understanding in the theories of International Trade, Marketing and Finance.

1年前

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