英语作文作业.帮我看下有无错误.

This Sunday . I (went) to the zoo with my classmates. On our way to the zoo,we
(met) Kangkang."Would you like to go to the zoo with us?"I (said). "I afraid I can't. My mother isn't in now . I have to look after my sister."Then he (went) home. We (got) to the zoo.My classmates (thought) monkeys (were) very clever.Elephants (were) kind.We all (liked) pandas. I (liked) pandas ,too.
这个周天,是过去的时间,用过去式

I afraid I can't 改为I am afraid I can't

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This Sunday . I go to the zoo with my classmates. On our way to the zoo,we
meet Kangkang."Would you like to go to the zoo with us?"I say. "I afraid I can't. My mother isn't in now . I have to look...

你是小学生吧？

This Sunday I go to the zoo with my classmates. On our way to the zoo,we
meet KangKang."Would you like to go to the zoo with us?"I say. "I'm afraid I can't. My mother isn't at home now . I have to...