小学三年级英语作文《我》求批改MEMy name is ye qi,I’m nine.I have tall body,

小学三年级英语作文《我》求批改
ME
My name is ye qi,I’m nine.I have tall body,two big eyes,two small ears and a small mouth.I like bananas,yellow,monkey.I am a happy boy.
I have a big bedroom.bedroom have a telephone It grey,two desk It a brown a yellow,and two chair It black.
I have big family.My grandfather is funny and heavy.He has old face.He love apple.My grandmother is kindly old lady.She has big body.She love grape.My father is tall and strong.He has a big month.He loves pineapple.My mother is pretty.She has thin body.She likes peach.
My teacher is tall and thin.She has thin body.She To teach we English.My friend is cute and naughty.He has two small eyes and two big ears.He likes mango.
The pet is a handsome cat is me.It has big body and a long tail.It likes fish and mice.
I love family.
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多多321 幼苗

共回答了20个问题采纳率:85% 举报

I have tall body
虽然没语法错误 但是还有点怪怪的 改成 I am tall.
I like bananas,yellow,monkey.
monkey 可数名词加 s
bedroom have a telephone It grey,
it grey 主谓宾 缺少一个谓语 is
two desk It a brown a yellow,
desk后加s It a brown a yellow有点怪怪的 改成
This is brown and that is yellow.
and two chair It black.
改成 and two chairs It is black.
He love apple.
改成He loves apples.
还有很多 名词没有加s 第三人称也要加s
自己再看看吧
话说 LZ的作文好干瘪瘪的 毕竟你才三年级
多写点作文 多看点作文 多问问老师
(看我码了这么多字 就采纳我的吧

1年前

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翡翠狐狸 幼苗

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Myself (我自己)
My name is Chen Xiaoye(陈小叶,参考一下,姓和名分开,姓和名首字母要大写). I’m nine. I am tall(我很高).I have two big eyes, two small ears and a small mouth. I like bananas . I am a happy boy.
I have a b...

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xia1978 幼苗

共回答了2个问题 举报

  还行,最好结尾改成I love my family

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羽衣甘蓝1625 幼苗

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  1. My name is ye qi, I’m nine. I have (1)a tall body, two big eyes, two small ears and a small mouth. I like bananas, yellow, monkey. I am a happy boy.

    I have a big bedr...

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独孤天青_oo 幼苗

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I have tall body最好改成I'm tall.然后再是I have……。 bananas, yellow, monkey的话三个放在一起没什么联系,从语法角度,是没错,但读起来不是很习惯。最好改成 I like bananas and monkey .my favourite color is yellow.
bedroom have a telephone It grey这...

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baics11 幼苗

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MY
My name is ye qi, I’m nine years old. I have tall body, two big eyes, two small ears ,a small nose and a small mouth. I like bananas, yellow, monkey. I am a happy boy.
I have a big bedroo...

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蓝金灵 幼苗

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My name is Ye Qi, I’m nine. I am tall and I have two big eyes, two small ears and a small mouth. I like bananas, yellow and monkeys. I am a happy boy.
I have a big bedroom. Bedroom has a grey te...

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