帮我看看这篇英语作文有什么修改之处,需要全改的话,这是一篇用第一人称来自我介绍的短文.

帮我看看这篇英语作文有什么修改之处,需要全改的话,这是一篇用第一人称来自我介绍的短文.
具体信息如下：
Name:PanPan(name of a panda)
Sex:Female
Age:3
Nationality:Chinese
Personality:shy、quiet
Hobby:sleeps during the day、 get up at night、 eats leaves .
Hi,My name is PanPan.I'm a three years old female panda.I'm from China and my nationality is Chinese.I'm very shy when I see some strangers,so I often quiet in case.I like sleeps during the day and get up at night.My favorite food are leaves and bamboos.This is me.Do you like me?
呵呵,我就这水平,请多多指教!