求一篇关于“明星的成功之路”的英语作文,200字以上,

I most like the human is Liu Xiang .the famous athlete Liu Xiang striding forward in the Olympics Games in Athens.Determination is universally regarded asa highly praised quality.It is neither genius nor extraordinary ability that gives us power to deal with and overcome whatever hardship one is confronted with.It is this kind of spirit that enables us to endure the difficult moments and attain our goals.
The determined spirit gives us light when we are in dark moments and encourages when we are frustrated.With this quality,no enemy can overwhelm us,and noobstacles can stand in our way.There are many examples of success being achieved solely through the strong will of the spirit.As in the picture,the athlete is running,with a determined spirit,towards the finishing line in order to obtain the gold medal,considered as the symbol of success for any sportsman.It is determination that leads to success.
It is not easy to cultivate this determined spirit.To do this,we must establish a firm faith in our actions and be ready to devote ourselves to them.We must boldly go through trials and hardships to train our will so as to get rid of the weak points of our moral character.Around us,there are quite a few people with this intense determination and spirit and set a good example for us to follow.
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