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Nowadays,bribery has become a part of life(前后都用a part of life会有点重复感,可以改一下).
It has become a part of our life(our是复数,不用加s,但前面用life最好跟返) naturally.
It is strongly believe that there are some advantages(his advantage贿赂不是人,不应该用HIS).
Bribery can solve some problems easily,when we encounter difficulties in daily life.
However,is it good for society too?(for society这有点口语化)
How about the poor?(no money for people不等于穷人)
Therefore,bribery is not fair of the poor.
the poor will get poorer,the rich richer(这句有点怪,但不懂改)
这些纯个人知识,有可能有些不对.
不过,网上的翻译通常较中文化,和较少句子结构
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