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When (asking改成asked) who is the most important person in my life,I would say it's my father.He has great influence (in改成on/upon) my life and has helped me (去掉out) become the person (whom改成who) I am today.He always pushes me to be the best and he is always there for me.He (believed改成believes) that there is a bright future ahead (加入of) me,and wants me to make the most of (them改成it) by getting good grades and going to a good college.He always tells me ,"You're not an average girl,(for改成so) you should not accept anything (what改成that) is below average ." He often tells me that with hard (works改成work) I will never fail.
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