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Tom's Day
Today is a school day.Tom gets up at around 6:30.Then he makes and eats his breakfast.Next,he goes to school at around 8:30.At 12:00,he has lunch in the school.When the class over,he goes home and has supper at 7:30.Then he does homework and takes a shower.At 10:00,he goes to bed.