初一英语纠错We often say that the earth is our homeland and human
初一英语纠错
We often say that the earth is our homeland and human society comes from nature.Therefore,I think our society is a part of nature.People should live harmoniously with nature.All the materials we need to live with come from nature,but we should also repay the nature,rather than blindly solicit.For example,we should plant more trees and take actions to protect the environment.In addition,we have to control population.Due to excessive population growth,human beings require much more natural resources than before,which lead to excessive pressure on nature.In order to long-term development,the population growth must be controlled.We all come from nature which is our homeland,so we must try best to protect it.
帮我找几个重点（重点就是要有语法的）单词和句子。
We often say that the earth is our homeland and human society comes from nature.Therefore,I think our society is a part of nature.People should live harmoniously with nature.All the materials we need to live with come from nature,but we should also repay the nature,rather than blindly solicit.For example,we should plant more trees and take actions to protect the environment.In addition,we have to control population.Due to excessive population growth,human beings require much more natural resources than before,which lead to excessive pressure on nature.In order to long-term development,the population growth must be controlled.We all come from nature which is our homeland,so we must try best to protect it.
帮我找几个重点（重点就是要有语法的）单词和句子。
赞 DJ南海 幼苗
共回答了22个问题采纳率：95.5% 举报
很高兴为你解答.
保证正确率~!
正确答案是：
We often say that the earth is our homeland and human society comes from nature.Therefore,I think our society is a part of nature.People should live harmoniously with nature.All the materials we need to live with come from nature,but we should also repay the nature,rather than blindly solicit.For example,we should plant more trees and take actions to protect the environment.In addition,we have to control population.Due to excessive population growth,human beings require much more natural resources than before,which 【leads】 to excessive pressure on nature.In order to 【have a】 long-term development,the population growth must be controlled.We all come from nature which is our homeland,so we must try 【 our】best to protect it.
【修改原因】：
1、 which 引导非限制性定语从句,指代 human beings require much more natural resources than before 这一件事情,用单数leads.
2、 没有In order to sth的表达,只有 in order to do sth 的表达.
3、 try one's best to do 尽一切努力做...
我觉得作为一名中学生的作文,已经很优秀了,错的都是些鸡毛蒜皮的小错误,继续加油~!
祝开心~!
保证正确率~!
正确答案是：
We often say that the earth is our homeland and human society comes from nature.Therefore,I think our society is a part of nature.People should live harmoniously with nature.All the materials we need to live with come from nature,but we should also repay the nature,rather than blindly solicit.For example,we should plant more trees and take actions to protect the environment.In addition,we have to control population.Due to excessive population growth,human beings require much more natural resources than before,which 【leads】 to excessive pressure on nature.In order to 【have a】 long-term development,the population growth must be controlled.We all come from nature which is our homeland,so we must try 【 our】best to protect it.
【修改原因】：
1、 which 引导非限制性定语从句,指代 human beings require much more natural resources than before 这一件事情,用单数leads.
2、 没有In order to sth的表达,只有 in order to do sth 的表达.
3、 try one's best to do 尽一切努力做...
我觉得作为一名中学生的作文,已经很优秀了,错的都是些鸡毛蒜皮的小错误,继续加油~!
祝开心~!
1年前 追问
7
for examle用不用改成such as
帮我找几个重点（重点就是要有语法的）单词和句子。
这篇文章的
可能相似的问题
-
请问各位初一英语纠错本至少要写多少道错的题目?如果写,需要多久?
1年前1个回答
-
1年前4个回答
-
1年前2个回答
-
1年前1个回答
-
1年前1个回答
-
1年前1个回答
-
1年前2个回答
-
1年前4个回答
-
1年前3个回答
-
1年前3个回答
-
1年前7个回答
你能帮帮他们吗