英语语法检查本篇文章有语法错误吗?Dear teachers and schoolmates,I can make a

英语语法检查
本篇文章有语法错误吗?
Dear teachers and schoolmates,I can make a speech here is my pleasure,the topic of my speech is "what is love" .
What is love?
In fact,love is the eternal topic for all human beings,and not easy to give a one sentence
definition.
Love is the rain in spring that can moisten everything.Love is the breeze in summer that can make us
feel cool.Love is the fruits in fall that can let us feel the joy of the harvest.And love is the sun in
winter that can keep us warm.Love is as beautiful as flowers,love is as wide as the sky.
In the earthquake in Yushu.Some people lost their lives.And some people lost their home.They were
helpless.This time,people around the world heard this,they donated money and tried their best to help
people in Yushu.Isn't this explain the love is extensive?
Actually,Love is around us all the time.It will appear with different types.
We should make good cherish it.
My speech is over,thanks.