Dear teacher,I am a student who came to the Psychological Ce

Dear teacher,
I am a student who came to the Psychological Center【去掉on】 last week. 【Under改成With】 your 【carefully改成careful】 help, I have successfully get out of confusion. I would like to extend my greatest 【appreciate 改appreciation】 for your help.
There was a time I always felt confused and over-burdened.You teach me when 【we are可省略】 facing challenges we should embrace the strong faith that we are indomitable and invincible. Our only 【emery改成enemy】 is ourselves.
I appreciate the opportunity of being your student. The experience will be unforgettable throughout my life【建议改成 This will be unforgettable experience of my life】. Now I am a confident girl who feels the world more beautiful than I 【加 have】ever seen. Please accept my sincerely gratitude.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming

Dear 名字.,
I am a student who came to the Psychological Center last week. Getting Benefit from your warm help, I have successfully get out of confusion. I would like to extend my greatest appreciat...

第一句去掉on，I would like to extend my ...for your help.这一句 I do appreciate it. 就可以。 You teach me 后面加上that ,第一段最后一句enemy拼写错误。 I appreciate the opportunity最好改成I am so glad to have the opportunity to be your...

错的很多 很多中式英语
last week 前面的on去掉
在某人的帮助下要用介词with 不能用under
carefully改成careful
I have successfully gotten
时态问题要注意 你的时态很混乱
enemy拼写错了
我觉得世界比我之前所看到的更加美丽，这句话翻译的很不对，完全中式英语
可以改成 w...

没发现什么问题,挺不错的.

Dear teacher,
I am a student who just came to the Psychological Center last week. With your careful help, I have successfully gotten out of confusion. I would like to extend my greatest appreciati...