帮偶看下那篇英语作文有没有什么语法问题啦!一定要仔细哦!My life in ten years

帮偶看下那篇英语作文有没有什么语法问题啦!一定要仔细哦!My life in ten years
What will my life be like in ten years?It will be very exciting,I think.And I want to be a famous tour guide.
If people want to go to the other countries,they will not need to take the plane.They will be only need me---a tour guide.We will not have to go to the different places on foot or by bus.We will wear a very special shirt.And then,we will fly in the sky.They will follow me to arrive in some places which they want to go.They will obey me.If not,they will lose their way.At the same time,we will breath the fresh air.We will have lots of fun in the sky.
To be a famous tour guide ,I will work hard now.I will learn many foreign languages because the visitors come from different countyies of the world.
I really hope my dream can come true!