Write a litter to your university library,making suggestions
Write a litter to your university library,making suggestions for improving its service.
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2,有什么语法表达方面的错误
Dear sir or madam,
I am a student in this university who come to the library for study everyday.I venture to write you a letter about how to improving the library’s service.I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to think of my suggestions.
First and foremost,there is always noise in the library.I strongly recommended that the supervisors should make effective roles so that it can regulate the readers.
Additionally,you can offer some hot water on the first floor so that students can have a drink when they are thirsty.
Last but not least,I will be great honored if you can provided us some new and useful books for many of the books are outdated.
I would like to express my gratitude for your kind consideration.Thank you for your time.I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
同学你说的有些不对