求高人来帮我修改下这篇英文诗!Your SmileYour smile is sweetLikes the meadow

求高人来帮我修改下这篇英文诗!
Your Smile
Your smile is sweet
Likes the meadow greet to me
Your smile is beauty
Likes the rose comes into blossom
Your smile is gentle
Likes the willow kisses my face
Your smile is warm
Likes the sun shines
I only have four scores now .If I got above five scores next time ,I will give it to you .Thank you very much
jou8123 1年前 已收到2个回答 举报
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0玉泡泡0 幼苗

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Your smile is sweet
Like the meadow greeting me
Your smile is beautiful
Like the rose coming into blossom
Your smile is gentle
Like the willow kissing my face
Your smile is warm
Like the sun shining through space

1年前

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XLHsiun 幼苗

共回答了7个问题 举报

In order to make your poem more clearly and coherently, You should replace the word [likes] with word [as], however, I suggest you not to use it consecutively.
Your smile
so sweet
as the m...

1年前

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