英语翻译，知道意思但是翻得不是很到位

英语翻译，知道意思但是翻得不是很到位
I have always enjoyed working with computers, so it was an easy decision to
major in computer science at California University with a plan to enter the IT
field. In school, I excelled in my computer-related classes and during my
college years, I became particularly interested in software development,
especially software that would help consumers. That’s why I applied for and
completed a one-year internship with Lotadoe Industries. At Lotadoe, I learned
how to formulate new ideas for software and how to communicate those ideas
effectively to the rest of the development team.
I am a very focused person and I tend to be product-oriented. At Lotadoe, I
made sure that whatever projects I worked on, I saw to completion. For
instance, I worked with a team that was developing a new version of a piece of
popular software called Rototype. I asked to be part of every step of software
development and at the end of the project, I was given the responsibility of
getting final technical approval. I made sure that I followed through with the
right departments, keeping my team informed of the progress. This is the type of
work I enjoy and that’s why I applied for a position with your company