英语句子格式问题和句子如何修改.

英语句子格式问题和句子如何修改.
the school is a place where not only providing textbook knowledge but also to train them how to build self-confidence and self-esteem,that both are good qualities of valuable members.
这句话里面providing 和to train 是否才能在格式不对应的问题?还有后面的that both 可不可以换成 both of which?怎么改这句比较好?
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不光是providing 和to train 不平行的问题,主要问题是where引导的定语从句没有主语!所以这句话最好不要用定语从句.The school is a place not only providing textbook knowledge but also traing them how to builid self-confidence and self-esteem,both of which are good qualities of valuable members.用现在分词做修饰成分,既简洁又正式,而且前后平行.

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the school is a place where not only provides textbook knowledge but also train students to build up self-confidence and self-esteem, both of which are good qualities of valuable members.

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