At the moment when I was about to give up, a friend of mine took me to the beach in a very rude way and gave me some advice. It was these suggestions which built my self-confidence.
正当我要放弃的时候,我的朋友以粗鲁的方式把我带到海边并给我提些建议,这些建议使我对自己自信起来" As I give up, my friend to rude way led me to the sea and give me some advice, these Suggestions and made me feel confident" 希望对你有帮助,望采纳O(∩_∩...
Right at the moment i almost gave up, my friend dragged me rudely to the seaside and gave me lots of advices, which pulled myself together since then. 我觉得最后两句衔接处还是用非限定定语从句比较好 更为自然。~