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Introduce myself
Hi,everyone!My name is ——（姓名,最好再说英文名）.I’m in ————（学校）.I want to be a reporter of Wuxi Daily.Let me introduce myself to you.I hope you’ll love me.
I have a lot of hobbies.Such as playing the piano,reading books,swimming,travelling,listening to music and so on.I play the piano well and I’ve passed the 10th step of Nanjing Arts Institute.I like listening to music because I think music makes me relaxed.It is one of the most important things for me.I want to be a person who understands music very well.Sometimes I think I can’t live without music.And I also like reading all kinds of books at any free time.Books and newspapers make me cleverer.I can get a lot of knowledge from reading.The book is the ladder of human progress.Books are best friends,when you encounter any difficulties in life,you can apply to it for help,it will never abandon you.
That is me ,a lovely and a cheerful girl.I will be very happy if I can become a reporter of your daily.You can e-mail me at ———————（自己的邮箱）or call me on ————（宅电）.
Many thanks.

Introduce myself
Hi, everyone! My name is ——（姓名，最好再说英文名）. I’m in ————（学校）. I want to be a reporter of Wuxi Daily. Let me introduce myself to you. I hope you’ll love me.
I have a lot of hobbies...

Introduce myself
Hi, everyone! My name is ——（姓名，最好再说英文名）. I’m in ————（学校）. I want to be a reporter of Wuxi Daily. Let me introduce myself to you. I hope you’ll love me.
I have a lot of hobbies...