这篇文章有无语法错误,怎么改?Honesty, Is It Out of Style?It’s a stupid and

Honesty,Is It Out of Style?(用 fashion)
It’s a stupid and outdated question,in my opinion.”Honesty”,as the traditional virtue of our nation,is an eternal value that should be highly praised.As a student of business school,I especially know the importance of honesty.As you might know,our modern society is based on the foundation of credit.Many economic indicators (such as the stock price etc) depend on the expectation of the masses.If you are not honest,you would probably have no qualifications to do the job again.Take the event of “南京冠生园”as an example,soon after the news that the company put the bad stuffing into the moon cake are (were) reported on TV and newspapers,all factories in Nanjing that are branded ”冠生园” are (were) closed down.And as customers all over the country are afraid of buying moon cake again,the whole moon cake industry lived a painstaking living that year.You see,the (= 删除) dishonesty of one single corporation almost destroyed the whole industry.And there are many other cases.As to each individual,honesty is also very important.As an accountant,if you cheat to some extent,you would lose the qualifications to do the job again according to the law.
With our market economy becoming more and more mature,I think the virtue of honesty would be more and more important.(不错的翻译)