英语短文改错last summer,I spent a couple of week at my aunt's.she
英语短文改错
last summer,I spent a couple of week at my aunt's.she lives in a mountain village,with a small river wind through it.On one morning I went there fishing.I was waiting patiently for a bite while suddenly here came a cry."Help!Help!"I looked at the direction of the cry and saw a boy in the river.Throwing away the fishing pole,I did best to run to the boy in the shortest time.I jumped into the river,swam quick towards the boy and pulled him out.Together with her mother,I took the boy to the nearest hospital.Fortunately,the boy is saved,and his mother thanked me gratefully.
last summer,I spent a couple of week at my aunt's.she lives in a mountain village,with a small river wind through it.On one morning I went there fishing.I was waiting patiently for a bite while suddenly here came a cry."Help!Help!"I looked at the direction of the cry and saw a boy in the river.Throwing away the fishing pole,I did best to run to the boy in the shortest time.I jumped into the river,swam quick towards the boy and pulled him out.Together with her mother,I took the boy to the nearest hospital.Fortunately,the boy is saved,and his mother thanked me gratefully.
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last summer,I spent a couple of week（改成weeks） at my aunt's.she lives (改成lived)in a mountain village,with a small river wind(改成winding) through it.On (去掉on)one morning I went there fishing.I was waiting patiently for a bite while(改成when) suddenly here (改成there)came a cry."Help!Help!"I looked at(改成in) the direction of the cry and saw a boy in the river.Throwing away the fishing pole,I did (+my)best to run to the boy in the shortest time.I jumped into the river,swam quick (改成quickly)towards the boy and pulled him out.Together with her mother,I took the boy to the nearest hospital.Fortunately,the boy is(改成was) saved,and his mother thanked me gratefully
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