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my summer vacation colourful life (都通用）
In July 2008,I went to England with my mother to see my father.He was studing there .We went to many interesting places.
First I visited the small town we lived.It’s not as big as Zibo.But it’s beautiful.We bought many things,such as telephone card,food,clothes and so on.Next we went to Cambridge and Oxford.It’s bigger than any school in China.Then we went to London.It’s the capital of England.We saw many old buildings,such as the Big Ben,the Tower Bridge.There are many new buildings,the London Eye and soon on.At last I visited Birmingham,and saw the Atlantic Ocean.But we didn’t swim,because the weather was cold.I think there isn’t any differences between the Atlantic Ocean and the Pacific Ocean.
And I found some interesting:In England it’s warm and humid in summer.The temperature is about 15~20℃.It rains continually.It’s a good place to spend the summer holiday for Chinese people.
I think my trip was fantastic.I enjoy it a lot.If you want to know more abut my trip,you can come to my home,and I can show the photos to you.