看看我这句话对不对的there are only 1 student using computer to study.i

看看我这句话对不对的
there are only 1 student using computer to study.it is good for our students to study on the internet.because we are students,studying is the most importent things.
看下有没错,错了改下
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yqq0932 幼苗

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only ong student uses the computer to study.it is good for the students to study on the internet because we are students and study is the most importent thing for us.只能这样改了.说实话我觉得第二句话...

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piaopiaolai 幼苗

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there are only 1 student using computer to study.it is good for our students to study on the internet.because we are students,studying is the most importent thing.
感觉有点啰嗦，逻辑上也不是很好

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烟之如水 幼苗

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三句话放在一起有点啰唆..student一次重复次数过多,我觉得应改为:Study is the most important thing for students.And it is good for students to study on internet.But there are only one student uses computer to study.比较好..^-^

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