初学英语写日记,求指导~每日一篇,有不对的地方帮忙改正一下,（5）
初学英语写日记,求指导~每日一篇,有不对的地方帮忙改正一下,（5）
I want to tell a story today.
Once upon a time,there was a rabbit and a tortoise.They were having a running race.
The hare thougut that its' speed is faster than the tortoise,so it ran for a while,then sat down on the ground to rest.Conversely,the tortoise ran slowly but had been insisting,Finally the tortoise won.
This story make me believe a thing,as long as I have been efforts,the result is not bad.
I want to tell a story today.
Once upon a time,there was a rabbit and a tortoise.They were having a running race.
The hare thougut that its' speed is faster than the tortoise,so it ran for a while,then sat down on the ground to rest.Conversely,the tortoise ran slowly but had been insisting,Finally the tortoise won.
This story make me believe a thing,as long as I have been efforts,the result is not bad.
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1.前面rabbit ,后面hare不太一致
2.The hare thougut that its' speed is faster than the tortoise.宾语从句中要用过去时态,因为主句用了过去时态thought
3.thought 打错了
4,so前面的标点应该是句号,s大写.
5.to have a rest
6.没写完一个完整的陈述句就用句号结束.
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2.The hare thougut that its' speed is faster than the tortoise.宾语从句中要用过去时态,因为主句用了过去时态thought
3.thought 打错了
4,so前面的标点应该是句号,s大写.
5.to have a rest
6.没写完一个完整的陈述句就用句号结束.
仅供参考
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